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Olive Branch Church · Essay Competition

"Leaders of Tomorrow"

2023 · Prize: NPR 4,25,000 · Winner: Arun Poudel

Year
2023
Announced
March 5, 2023
Deadline
May 15, 2023
Results
July 16, 2023
Prize
NPR 4,25,000
Winner
Arun Poudel

About the Competition

As Olive Branch Church entered its 22nd year, the 2023 essay competition looked forward rather than back. "Leaders of Tomorrow" invited young writers to articulate a vision — not a fantasy, but a grounded, principled vision — for what faithful leadership in their community might look like over the next ten years.

The competition was promoted through 8 schools and 3 colleges in Pokhara, and for the first time entries were accepted from youth aged 14 to 30 across all of Nepal. 134 entries were received, from Pokhara, Kathmandu, Dhangadhi, and even two entries from Nepali students studying abroad.

The judging panel of six included two former essay competition winners from earlier years, a school principal, and a member of the church's youth leadership conference organising committee.

Competition Theme

A vision for leading communities of faith with courage, humility, and purpose in the coming decade.

Writers were encouraged to approach the theme through personal narrative, theological reflection, argumentative essay, or a combination of these forms.

Who Can Enter

Word limit: 1,000 – 3,000 words  ·  Language: English, Nepali, or bilingual

Criteria

All submissions are reviewed by a panel of church elders, educators, and community representatives. Entries are scored across four weighted criteria:

Vision & Specificity A concrete, believable vision — not vague aspiration, but specific imagined leadership 30%
Values Grounding The values (faith-based, ethical, community-rooted) underpinning the vision 25%
Writing Craft Voice, structure, persuasiveness, and originality of prose 25%
Community Rootedness Whether the vision is grounded in real, local community knowledge 20%

Timeline

March 5, 2023
Competition Announced
Theme, eligibility, and submission guidelines published
May 15, 2023
Submission Deadline
All entries must be received by midnight
July 16, 2023
Winner Announced
Result shared at Sunday service and posted on church notice board

Winner

Competition Winner · 2023
Arun Poudel
Prize: NPR 4,25,000

Arun Poudel, aged 21, was a second-year business student and youth group leader at Olive Branch Church. His essay, "Lead from the Ground Up," argued that the most effective community leaders of the next decade will not be those who seek positions of authority, but those who choose to remain in their communities when leaving would be easier. Drawing on his own experience mentoring younger students and organising neighbourhood clean-up drives, Arun wrote with the authority of someone who had already begun the work he was describing. "The leader tomorrow needs is already here," he wrote. "They are just waiting to be told that staying matters."

Essay queries: info@olivebranchchurchpokhara.com   ·   Contact Pastor Deepraj: pastordeepraj@olivebranchchurchpokhara.com